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This is probably the longest chapter so far. You guys will have to let me know what you think of it, as I'm a little self conscious and paranoid about the content of this chapter. This is all a part of the plan and the tone of everything was meant to change a little. We're getting deeper into the larger story that goes beyond Seven and Ari. Buckle up, guys! You're in for a trip from here on out. c:

Special thanks to JakeJynx again for helping me think this chapter through and doing a marvelous editing job for me. <3

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Seventh Ring: Part 1 - Sold
Chapter 1: Sold
New Earth, 418 A.C. (After Contact)
"We'll start the bidding off at 100 credits!"
Ari shifted uncomfortably in her seat as the auction began. The fan she'd crafted out of the event's flier was starting to crumple  between her fingers and become less and less useful the faster she moved her arm. The heat of the sun above them was unbearable,  despite how early in the afternoon the auction was scheduled. It didn't help that the tight leather corset that hugged her middle was making it harder for her to breathe and shed the heat her body was emitting. A long, cream-colored dress  kept her legs hot while a wide, flowery bonnet  helped shield her pale face. She unlocked her ankles and shifted her weight in the hard wooden  chair near the auction's stage.
"Stop fidgeting, will you?" hissed the man beside her.
She obeyed and recrossed her legs without meeting his gaze. She didn't move again until the auctioneer shouted "sold!"
The object that was  Seventh Ring: Part 2 - Numbers
Chapter 2: Numbers
New Earth, 418 A.C. (After Contact)
"Bring the coach around back, Two," said William hastily to a tall, lanky alien standing beside a jet-black carriage. Two was one of William and Ari's longest owned aliens. He was also one of their most trusted, hence their allowing him to remain unchained and unsupervised with their carriage. They were certain of his loyalty to them and often left him in charge of simple tasks; like going to the market and cleaning around the house.
Two looked as though he had just stepped out of the 17th century. He was an older, stuffy-looking alien who had a small head, long  face, a large nose,  and big green eyes that always seemed to be looking down at everyone. He also had ears that were long like a goat's, but one could never tell, because he insisted on keeping them tied behind his head like a tiny ponytail. William chose him specifically for his snobby demeanor and snooty, high-end tastes. When  Seventh Ring: Part 3 - Formalities
Three was silent for a moment, making sure that William had put enough distance between them before he spoke. He was short by alien standards and quite stocky and square-shaped. His body was covered in a thick, leathery skin that was no doubt used to protect him from the harsh rays of his own planet's star. He appeared to be reptilian, but his face looked like a scaly bulldog. Two long teeth pointed straight up from his lower jaw and wrinkles sagged over his forehead, cheeks, and below his eyes. Three was clearly well-aged.
"So, they've reached as far as Kazek, huh?"  he asked curiously in a rough, dry voice. He tucked the dirty towel he'd been using into his back pocket and crossed his thick arms. His tattered, once-white shirt was covered in what looked like oil and red dirt beneath a tight pair of suspenders that stretched over his very broad shoulders. Seven looked at him fiercely, but it was obvious that Three was genuinely curious. "They don't tell us much 'round here.
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I loved the insight into Ari and Two's relationship - truly, it's interesting to see how Two, who seemed so stiff and unpenetrable in the beginning of the story, shows more and more of his tender side as the time goes. :)

Woah, that sudden turn of events was a surprise! I knew that things were serious when Two was attacked, but I still didn't expect this. I'm really curious about what those men wanted, for they seemed to target Ari specifically... Maybe whoever was behind it planned to use her as a hostage and lever against William? Another question is who put the systems down from the inside - I'd say one of the drudges is a good guess, considering their position of captivity and abuse. :plotting: Both Ari and Lucas surprised me there in a good way - I had no idea Ari was a pilot, and Lucas turned out to be a good sniper for such a geek he is. ;) 

But that ending... :o I remembered Ari saying how William used Four against his enemies, but I still underestimated the shifter. Of course, considering how powerful he is hinted to be, Four just became so much more scary.